These first and second drafts of animal illustrations were created by kindergarten students at the Robious Elementary School in Midlothian, Virginia, and are an example of the power of critique and revision even for young students.

Concepts

animals, illustrations, revision

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Additional Tags

drafts of student drawing, el education, expeditionary learning, expeditionary learning: animal pictures and drafts, revising drafts

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Classroom Considerations

• Knovation Readability Score: 4 (1 low difficulty, 5 high difficulty)
• The intended use for this resource is Instructional

Common Core

SL.K.5